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For [livejournal.com profile] macadamanaity, who wanted the Doctor and Rory having a conversation that wasn't about Amy. Minor spoilers for "The Big Bang", but blink and you'll miss 'em.

Ficlet:: Sweetpeas
by Raven
G, Doctor Who, gen, 1000 words. Amy's in the bath, Rory's in the wardrobe, the Doctor is nowhere in particular.


Amy is in the bath, warbling happily – among its many modern conveniences, the TARDIS bathroom features both a tub you can do lengths in and meticulously comprehensive soundproofing – and Rory is, a little to his own surprise, in the wardrobe. It's understandable, though, he thinks. He wore the centurion's outfit for two thousand years, and then a morning suit for a lot longer than a morning, and there's got to be something here, among the fur bikinis, feather boas, rubber catsuits and Technicolor dreamcoats, that he can wear.

Rory takes a Bermuda shirt off a hanger. "Hi!" says the Doctor from underneath it.

"Jesus, Doctor." Rory takes a very deep breath and a very big step backwards. "You nearly gave me a heart attack."

"Sorry," says the Doctor, but he doesn't sound sorry; in fact, he sounds distracted. As though he were doing something incredibly important in his own wardrobe under a pineapple-print shirt, and Rory has taken him rudely away from it.

"I'll leave you alone," Rory mutters to himself, and goes on riffling along the racks. Silence from beneath the pineapples for a moment, and then the Doctor sticks his head out and says, "Rory. What do you want?"

"Just... something to wear," Rory says helplessly. "Trousers. A t-shirt. Something."

The Doctor gets up, drifts to the edge of the room to rummage in a cupboard, and in a surprisingly short time, hands Rory a pair of jeans, a belt, a plain black t-shirt and a pair of boots, all polished and pressed and in his size. "If you want to get changed, don't mind me," he says, waving a vague hand. "I'll just stare at the floor for a bit, it's very interesting."

"I don't mind," Rory says, because he really doesn't – he used to change into scrubs in front of an entire hospital and into plate-metal armour in front of an entire Roman legion – and when he's dressed, the Doctor is looking at him expectantly.

"What?" he asks, guardedly.

"Anything else you want?" the Doctor says. Before Rory can say anything, he sighs. "Amy's... she's marvellous, isn't she? She loves art, she loves carnivals, she loves baths. She's wonderful, but she's not you, Rory. What do you want?"

"Er," Rory says, because he hates this sort of thing – he hated careers questionnaires at school, he hates online quizzes and "what personality type are you" and all that stuff - and the Doctor suddenly grabs his hand and starts walking.

"I don't know you yet," he's saying, half to himself, as Rory struggles to keep up, "but I wonder... I wonder."

They walk around the spiral staircase, out of the wardrobe, along a corridor, up some more stairs, round three left turns, across a small bridge that seems to cross nothing at all, under a large window apparently open to space, down another staircase and stop at a small, wooden door.

It takes two minutes' ferreting around in his pocket, but eventually the Doctor finds a key for it, and jangles it around in the lock for a while. When the door shrieks open, Rory steps inside first.

It's a garden. It's more than that; it's open to the elements, somewhere, somehow, and there's a blue sky above and sun on his face, and wind, gentle and cool, whipping through his hair. And there's fresh, springy turf, and beds laid out, some with flowers growing, and some with vegetables. He recognises dahlias, peonies, masses of fragrant sweetpeas, and recognises other flowers as alien: strange blue spiky things, poppies in a shade they never grow in on Earth, an odd variegated creeper with the light parts in lilac rather than yellow. It's all there, patterns of growth and promise.

He's started to think about what needs watering, what needs pruning, how to get rid of that ugly ageing shrub and what he would put in its place, before he remembers where he is and who he's with. The Doctor is sitting cross-legged on the grass, and a few feet behind him is the door, standing all by itself like a monument in the landscape.

"How did you know?" Rory asks quietly, going to sit beside him.

"I didn't," the Doctor tells him. "I didn't. I just thought... you might like gardens. I don't know you yet, Rory, but I thought that you like to look after things. And people. It's something about who you are."

Rory smiles and doesn't say anything for a moment; he's enjoying the breeze. "Is it real?" he asks after a while. "All of this?

"Real?" The Doctor shrugs. "There's real, and there's real. If you plant a seed in the ground here, it'll grow. If you leave your tools out, they'll rust."

"Good enough for me." Rory leans back onto the soft ground and sighs.

"I've never been any good at it, you know," the Doctor goes on, conversationally. "Looking after things, or people, or anything, really. I'm very good at saving them from mortal peril. After that, not so good."

"Maybe you should try getting a pet," Rory says. "Other than'" – and then he stops, because he's realised what he's about to say.

The Doctor peers at him. "Other than you and Amy, you mean? You're not the first to accuse me of that, and you won't be the last."

"Other people have travelled with you, too," Rory says curiously. "Haven't they? I saw the clothes in the wardrobe... what happened to them?"

"Mostly, they moved on," the Doctor says. "They travelled with me for a time, and then they went on to other things, things worthy of them. I like people, I like humans in particular, but people, and I like asking them to travel the universe with me. Is that a very terrible thing?"

"No," Rory says, surprised. "No. My grandmother in Leadworth has this cat, it's old and mangy and it keeps getting its leg stuck in barbed wire and running up huge vet bills. She says she keeps it because it's another heartbeat in the house."

The Doctor smiles. "You're a kind man, Rory."

"Well," Rory says, grinning, "then maybe you do know me a little better already."

The Doctor claps him on the back. "Do you suppose Amy's out of the bath yet?"

"Yeah," Rory says. "If the universe needs saving, she can do it. Have you got a trowel anywhere? And some shears?"

"In the kitchen," the Doctor says, getting up and heading to the door. "Come with me, I'll show you."

As they leave, the Doctor reaches into his pocket and tosses Rory the key. "Look after it," he says.

"Better than you," Rory tells him, grinning, and they head back together.

finis.
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on 2010-07-03 09:48 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] marag.livejournal.com
Ooooh, that's just lovely. It really does seem perfect for Rory and how lovely of the Doctor to have thought of something for him.

on 2010-07-04 09:18 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thanks very much!

on 2010-07-03 09:50 pm (UTC)
ext_1798: (jack harkness manwhore/dancy dreamer)
Posted by [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
I like Rory and the Doctor hanging out together. And the idea of the Doctor trying to puzzle out what Rory wants seems very like him, and very sweet. Boys! *smushes them*

on 2010-07-04 09:18 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*grins* Oh, thank you!

on 2010-07-03 10:21 pm (UTC)
ext_7885: Photo of Bitch,please Scarlet O'Hara (DW - Anyone can save the world - sarah53)
Posted by [identity profile] scarlettgirl.livejournal.com
*heart*

I'm a bit easy for Rory but this tops. I love how, fundamentally, he knows who he is. And I love that Doctor wants to figure that out.

on 2010-07-04 09:18 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! I heart Rory too. :)

on 2010-07-03 10:23 pm (UTC)
ext_901: (Default)
Posted by [identity profile] foreverdirt.livejournal.com
Oh, Rory. I do love that he is a person, and he has his wants and needs and inner life, and that for all Amy is my favourite and I am warming to this Doctor, Rory is kind of one of us.

Which is to say: You give good Rory.

on 2010-07-04 09:19 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
I am so glad! I love Rory; I think his loyalty and his dedication are so nicely understated, but there.

on 2010-07-03 10:27 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] tempestsarekind.livejournal.com
Yaaaaaaay. Oh, Rory. Oh, Eleven. <3

This just seems so spot-on, about both Rory and the Doctor--and Eleven seems like the sort who would admit those things about himself, where Nine and Ten might not.

on 2010-07-04 10:21 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you very much!

on 2010-07-03 10:42 pm (UTC)
such_heights: amy and rory looking at a pile of post (who: amy smile)
Posted by [personal profile] such_heights
Awww, this is lovely! And just right for Rory.

on 2010-07-04 10:21 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Aww, thanks!

on 2010-07-04 10:21 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*grins*

on 2010-07-04 12:15 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] true-masquerade.livejournal.com
You're right, Rory wants things to look after and people to love. Amy is the Girl Who Waited because she wanted adventure and uniqueness, but I think Rory is the Boy Who Waited out of love :-)

It's a beautiful insight into both Rory and the Doctor. Thank you so much for writing :-)

on 2010-07-04 10:21 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
And thank you for reading! I am so glad you liked it.

on 2010-07-04 04:24 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] macadamanaity.livejournal.com
::SQUISHES YOU AND THEM SO HARD::

I just... I love this quiet, sweet characterisation of these two on their own merits. I know it's massively out of character for me to ask for a fic that DEemphasizes an awesome female character, but I really love seeing Rory being his own person in ways that aren't defined by his relationship with Amy (meaning that by extension, she isn't either). Seriously, this is lovely and I love it. Thank you!

on 2010-07-04 07:57 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Oh, honey, I am so glad you liked it. Thanks for the prompt; I don't think I would ever have given Rory this sort of serious thought without it.

on 2010-07-04 07:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] littlered2.livejournal.com
Oh, Rory. This is lovely.

on 2010-07-04 10:43 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thank you!

on 2010-07-04 12:10 pm (UTC)
cedara: (DoctorWho:Eleven+Rory)
Posted by [personal profile] cedara
Lovely little story. Great work.

on 2010-07-04 10:43 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thank you!

on 2010-07-04 02:51 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] jamarish.livejournal.com
This is lovely, it's really easy to see Rory taking care of living things, from humans to plants. I'd like to see him spending more time with the Doctor next season, not only as Amy's husband but as a proper companion, after all, he has 2000 years of memories now, I'm sure he could relate a lot to the Doctor and they could have really interesting conversations.

on 2010-07-04 11:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thank you!

on 2010-07-04 04:01 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sahiya.livejournal.com
Yes, this is Rory to me. A nurse, a gardener, someone who looks after things. Thank you for writing!

on 2010-07-04 11:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
And thank you for reading! :)

on 2010-07-04 04:50 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] adler1013.livejournal.com
Oh, I really like this. Well done. <3

on 2010-07-04 11:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thank you!

on 2010-07-04 06:08 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] betawho.livejournal.com
That was lovely! Your wording a couple of times had me thinking this was going to wander off into slashfic, I even went and double checked the rating. But you kept it as a wonderful friends moment and you got both the Doctor and Rory's voices down perfectly.

Really enjoyed it! Thanks!

(If you like sweet little moments in the Tardis, you might want to read A Cure For Nightmares (http://betawho.livejournal.com/20960.html) Amy is having nightmares, and the Doctor has a cure. It's rated G too.

on 2010-07-04 11:07 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
I think Doctor/Rory would be rather nice, myself. But that's not what my friend asked for. :) Thanks for reading!

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Posted by [identity profile] macadamanaity.livejournal.com - on 2010-07-05 09:09 pm (UTC) - Expand

on 2010-07-04 07:16 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] freakishlemon.livejournal.com
Lovely. This is wonderful. Rory gets his garden and the Doctor feels like he's done something right. Huzzah!

Also, I like the idea of Rory growing vegetables in there and then forcing them on the Doctor and Amy. The two of them probably have terrible diets. XD

on 2010-07-04 11:07 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*grins* Hee! Thanks very much!

on 2010-07-04 10:00 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] tau_sigma
I loooove you. I love your Rory and the Doctor fic (and Amy fic). I hope you are inspired to write lots more.

on 2010-07-04 11:08 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*smiles* I hope so too! Thank you, my dear.

on 2010-07-06 03:57 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] bornofstars.livejournal.com
Oh Eleventy, oh Rory. I really like your Eleven - it seems like he's a difficult voice to capture because he's a lot more suble than Ten, but you do a great job.

on 2010-07-08 11:19 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

on 2010-07-06 06:37 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] the-acrobat.livejournal.com
Hmm... Rory! I love Rory, and I love what you've done with him here. Gardens! Of course, gardens. I love that Rory, who isn't really in the spotlight - at least not the way Amy is - gets to have personality and depth and interests all his own. It's kind of like the Bechdel test, twisted: the Doctor and Rory talking about something other than Amy. And also, the way Rory isn't really sure what he wants or likes, just the way the Doctor wasn't in that wonderful first episode of the season (fishsticks with custard?). Wonderful story, hon.

on 2010-07-08 11:20 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thanks so much, lovely! The funny thing is, that was exactly [livejournal.com profile] macadamanaity requested - the Bechdel test in reverse!

on 2010-07-09 02:33 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] petronelle.livejournal.com
This is lovely and heartwarming. I adore your Rory.

on 2010-07-10 10:33 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Aww, honey, thank you!

on 2010-07-12 07:27 am (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] fairestcat
I really, really like this. The insight into what their relationship is and might be feels very true and right.

on 2010-07-19 10:53 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thanks, my dear. :)

on 2010-07-20 07:25 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kattahj.livejournal.com
Oh, very nice! You made my admiration for Rory rise even further. (Like the Doctor, I'm terrible with flowers.)

on 2010-07-20 09:35 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] tardis-stowaway.livejournal.com
This is lovely! I laughed out loud at the Doctor popping out at Rory from behind a shirt. That's such a typically adorkable, bizarre Eleven move. Eleven's decision to get to know Rory better was so sweet, and Rory's inability to even say made me want to give him a big hug. The garden is so perfect for him. I hope they have lots of adorable boy-bonding in the future!

on 2010-08-23 01:27 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] glass-moment.livejournal.com
This is lovely, great insights into both characters.

on 2011-01-08 06:44 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] youraugustine.livejournal.com
Oh Rory. ♥

(I'm very late to the party, but this was lovely, so have a comment.)
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