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I first proposed this idea at Collectormania, at the first ever [livejournal.com profile] new_who meet-up, to a frightened silence and a promise from [livejournal.com profile] hathy_col that if I wrote it, she would personally never speak to me again. It was going to be pornier.

Well, I keep my promises, as they say. Colleen, this is very definitely for you, with all the love and rubber gloves in the world. Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] gwynnega for the beta.

Fic:: Children Of The Revolution
by Raven
PG, Doctor Who, gen UST

A stranger crashed through the outside door, skidded to a halt, swung around and declaimed to no-one in particular, “I don’t live here!”

Rose was the only person in the console room. She jumped up, shrieking a little in surprise, and he turned to stare at her. She stared back.

“Who are you?” they asked simultaneously, and there was a brief burst of confusion when they tried to tell each other at once, and then silence. Rose held up a wagging finger. “Stay here!” Hoping he would, she ran down into the corridors of the TARDIS, yelling, “Doctor!”

For some reason, the ship seemed more labyrinthine than usual; after the second wrong turning, she’d lost sight of where she was going and then cannoned straight into him. “What?” he asked. “Who’s died?”

“Some bloke just came into the TARDIS,” she said breathlessly. “From outside!”

“What’s he look like?” asked the Doctor as she dragged him along.

Rose paused. “He’s really tall and he’s got curly hair.”

The Doctor stopped dead. “Sort of like Toulouse-Lautrec on LSD?”

“What?”

He started walking again. “Never mind.”

But she’d taken too long. When they got there, the console room was empty and Rose sighed. There was no sign of her intruder.

“All quiet on the Western Front.” The Doctor picked up his sonic screwdriver from the console and started playing with it.

“He was here.” Rose turned in a full circle, as though expecting him to leap out from somewhere. “He was. I wouldn’t imagine something like that!”

“Of course you wouldn’t,” said the Doctor soothingly. “I believe you. I suppose someone came running in trying to make a phone call, and has now promptly run out again.”

“Yeah, I guess.” Rose was still doubtful. “Aren’t we on an alien planet? Do aliens need to make phone calls?”

“I’m not human, and I go round in a telephone box,” the Doctor pointed out. “What were you doing in here, anyway?”

Rose held up the book left on her chair. “Just reading.”

“Try the cloisters,” he suggested. “Much better for your eyes, natural light.”

“Yeah, okay.” Rose frowned for a moment, then tramped back across the room. “Aren’t you coming?”

“I will,” he promised. “Just give me two minutes, I’ve got one or two things to sort out in here.”

She nodded and ran off. A minute passed in the room, broken by two sets of breathing and the faint creak of the outside door.

“I know you’re there,” said the Doctor. “You can come out now.”

There was silence for a few moments, and then the softest of noises. He came quietly, step by step, with the lights of the console playing over his face. His voice, when he spoke, was familiar whilst remaining alien. “How did you know?”

The Doctor smiled a little. “I was you. I remember it.”

“Ah.” He sat down on the floor beside the Doctor and peered around the room, his eyes flickering across the outside door and the plunging time rotor. “Which means you would be” – he stumbled over the words – “the Doctor.”

“Yes,” agreed the Doctor, “I am, and you’re a ghost.”

He was sitting beside the Doctor now, his long scarf trailing across the floor. Catching the Doctor’s eyes on it, he lifted it and placed the fraying ends into the Doctor’s hands. “I don’t think so, not yet. I don’t feel like a ghost, hmm?”

The Doctor held the rough wool, noting the texture, the muted colours, the sheer normality of it, and presently found himself gripping it loosely as not to let it drop. “No,” he conceded finally. “You don’t.”

“I’m very glad to hear it.” He smiled, and the Doctor realised he had never seen that smile, not really, just as he had never paused to look, really look, at the scarf, and with a slight smile of his own, began to wonder why so many people found him unnerving.

“Let me guess,” he said. “You’re about to offer me a jellybaby.”

“I will admit, the thought had crossed my mind,” said the other, “but I don’t believe I have any at present.” He felt in his pockets and drew out a paper bag, shaking out its contents into his hands. “Ah, two left. Just enough – unless of course, you have any companions?” He looked around the room, as though expecting them to leap out from behind a pillar.

“I have two,” the Doctor told him. “You gave Rose the fright of her life a second ago. I’ve sent her back inside.”

“And the other?”

“Jack accidentally got married last night. He’s off getting it annulled.”

“Ah, understandable. Red or green?”

“Green, please,” said the Doctor, taking it. The taste of it was surprising; sweet and familiar like a half-forgotten tune. When he looked up the other one was lying back and staring reflectively at the ceiling. “You know,” said the Doctor, “you talk a lot less than I remember.”

He was treated to that smile again. “Doesn’t make for scintillating conversation, this paradox. You know everything I know, and well, I’m not allowed to know anything you know.”

“You’re lucky.” The Doctor said it before he was able to catch himself, and he gripped reflexively at the scarf, hoping its owner hadn’t caught the slip.

“I daresay I am.” He licked his lips clean of sugar and settled back. “No, please don’t explain, I’m sure you’ll only depress me. Incidentally, why do you sound like you’re from the north?”

The Doctor laughed. He couldn’t help it. “Straight to the point, as always. I don’t think you ever knew how annoying you were.”

“I wonder if that’s a compliment. Upon deliberation I think not.” He stood up and began to pace around the console room, seemingly unaffected, but the Doctor knew better than to underestimate his intellect; he would have caught the slip into past tense without a doubt. “I’m interested to see what you’ve done with the place.”

The Doctor grinned, remembering. “You don’t have to tell me – you don’t like it.”

“It’s different, certainly.” He had paused, a hand on the controls, and the Doctor got to his feet and moved so he was directly behind his former self, looking over his shoulder down at the console.

“That’s the analogue osmosis dampener,” he said, guiding his hands. “You know, the one you could never find.”

This close, there was no suggestion of his being a ghost. The Doctor could feel his body heat now, and felt his other hand drifting naturally towards the other’s leonine hair. The weight and warmth of another living, breathing Time Lord seemed suddenly the only thing that mattered in the world; the Doctor thought he could feel the reassuring murmur of another double heartbeat.

“So it is.” He shifted, his hands moving back over the console. “Romana would approve.”

“How is Romana?” asked the Doctor, falling back. They were facing each other again now, a metre apart. Inconsequentially, the Doctor noticed they were wearing the same pair of boots.

“Currently very well indeed, as she and K9 are conspiring to throw me out of my own TARDIS. Something about a slight accident I had some time ago and something else about the destruction of the universe as we know it, same old story. In any case, it’s most unfortunate but nothing to worry about.”

The Doctor smiled back at him, taking in his bright eyes, unruly hair and twenty-foot scarf; off to save the universe with his faithful companion, robot dog and bag of jellybabies. To the Doctor’s eyes, he seemed inescapably young. “And how’s the revolution going?” he asked.

“Oh, as well as can be expected. That’s the thing about sudden-onset democracies – nothing ever gets done. Talking of which, I must be going. I might have been gone long enough for Romana to worry. I hope.” He grinned, and paused as he opened up the outside door. Off the Doctor’s look, he added, “Don’t worry, I’ll try to forget this ever happened.”

“Thank you.”

“Oh, and...” He still lingered on the threshold, and his voice took on a tinge of the melodramatic. “‘Though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil...”

The Doctor nodded. His own voice was far more familiar to his ears, quiet and speaking only truth. “For you are with me. I remember that. Goodbye, Doctor.”

“Goodbye.” The door closed behind him.

The Doctor laughed for a moment. “Yes, goodbye, you curly-headed lunatic,” he said quietly, and was surprised at the note of affection that had crept, unnoticed, into his voice.

A short while afterwards, Jack arrived bearing an ornate certificate and a triumphant expression. “Got everything sorted out okay, but there’s some sort of commotion going on outside,” he reported. “It was all right when I went, but on the way back I saw a funny man in a funny hat and this girl... ah, the girl.” He smiled. “Really lovely girl, lots of blonde hair, weird taste in men... where was I?”

“About to be slapped.”

“And they’re at the head of some sort of revolutionary parade and there’s a military coup – was there this much social unrest last night, or was I just too busy to notice? – and there’s chanting and fireworks and the army are throwing down their weapons and from what I can tell it’s all because of this one guy and his girlfriend. Sorry, what did you just say?”

“Nothing,” said the Doctor. “Do go on.”

But before he could, Rose had stamped in. “What happened to you, Doctor?” she demanded. “I thought you just had one or two things to take care of.”

“Yes. Jack, for example,” said the Doctor mildly.

“Oh, you’re back! Did you get it?” she asked, and Jack waved the certificate at her.

“All hail the revered and most honoured sanctity of divorce. As I was saying, Doctor, there’s a workers’ revolution, peace and goodwill to all, and don’t you think we ought to go out and help them?” Jack asked. “Seeing as how toppling governments in one night is usually our job.”

The Doctor strolled to the door, opened it and peered outside. “No,” he said after a moment, and grinned. “I rather think they’ll be just fine on their own.”

finis

on 2005-07-04 09:55 pm (UTC)
ext_17485: (hello Jack)
Posted by [identity profile] calapine.livejournal.com
I enjoyed that, and, darnit, I love the way you write Jack. It causes as much Squee as the real thing. :D

on 2005-07-04 10:38 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you. *draws hearts round Jack*

on 2005-07-04 10:00 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] dynamitebebe.livejournal.com
Now that's what I call a fan-fic. No, a proper Dr Who short story. Very poignant, sad yet upbeat :) I loved it so much, I just added it to memories.

on 2005-07-04 10:38 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it.

on 2005-07-04 10:06 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] doyle_sb4.livejournal.com
This is brilliant! I love Four's "I don't live here" and the revolution going on outside and Jack getting married. Oh, and Romana and K9 trying to evict him from his own TARDIS *g*

on 2005-07-04 10:49 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*g* Thank you! I'm glad you liked.

on 2005-07-04 10:31 pm (UTC)
ext_9648: (doctor who)
Posted by [identity profile] spasticat.livejournal.com
A lovely story and the voices of the characters were great, especially Baker's Doctor. Thank you so much for sharing the story. :)

on 2005-07-04 10:50 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Oh, you're very welcome. I'm glad you liked it. And Four, bless him, is a pleasure to write. :)

on 2005-07-04 10:54 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] whydah.livejournal.com
Awesome! I don't usually even finish reading fanfiction, but this totally kept my interest and I'm commenting :D Really nice flow, and even as someone who hasn't actually seen much of the old school stuff, made perfect sense.

on 2005-07-05 10:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thank you! I was uncomfortably aware that this would make no sense if you hadn't met Four, so I'm really glad you liked it. :)

on 2005-07-04 11:20 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] frightened.livejournal.com
Ooh, nice. And I could hear Tom Baker saying the words in my head - you've got that one absolutely spot-on. Lovely story.

on 2005-07-05 10:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thank you! *g*

on 2005-07-04 11:29 pm (UTC)
that_mireille: Mireille butterfly (Four)
Posted by [personal profile] that_mireille
I loved this. Both Doctors exactly right, and Jack's divorce, and the revolution. You're very good with writing Four (and everyone else, but that particularly stood out).

on 2005-07-05 10:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Hee, thank you. I really haven't seen much Four - only two stories - so I'm so glad you think so. :)

on 2005-07-04 11:53 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] denorios.livejournal.com
Four! Four! Four andNine!

I think I love you.

on 2005-07-05 10:46 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*giggle* Thank you.

on 2005-07-05 12:21 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] yonmei.livejournal.com
He smiled, and the Doctor realised he had never seen that smile, not really, just as he had never paused to look, really look, at the scarf, and with a slight smile of his own, began to wonder why so many people found him unnerving.

“Let me guess,” he said. “You’re about to offer me a jellybaby.”


Oh, I love it.

And they're wearing the same pair of boots! (If they're Martens, is that a paradox?) Somehow I love that detail especially.

*clicks Memories*

on 2005-07-05 03:43 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Hee! I'm glad you liked. I actually pictured them as Four's buccaneer boots (maybe the revolution planet is particularly muddy?) but Martens would work, too. :)

on 2005-07-05 07:16 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] amchau.livejournal.com
Oh, what a wonderful use for a time paradox!

But hang on a minute-- don't they touch somewhere there, touch enough to do whatever the Doctor was so worried would happen to Rose in Father's Day? Surely the Doctor's first thought on meeting himself would be the problems of the paradox... unless there's canon that contradicts that.

That aside, it's brilliantly written. I love the details-- the revolution, Jack, etc. And the green jelly baby.

on 2005-07-05 12:18 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] violentdispair.livejournal.com
don't worry, time lords have a tendency to be immune.
or at least, the different incarnations of the same time lord. not sure they explored the problem of teh same body meeting yet...

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on 2005-07-05 07:30 am (UTC)
cedara: (Doctor_Who:*swoon*)
Posted by [personal profile] cedara
Oooooooooooh... FOUR! :-)

on 2005-07-05 03:45 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*giggle* Indeed.

on 2005-07-05 08:06 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ancalemon.livejournal.com
Will you ever write a fic I don't enjoy a lot? Not that I'm asking you to! Anyway. This is really...cute. Which is maybe not quite the right reaction, but the jellybabies and Jack and the scarf...it is. It's cute. XD

on 2005-07-05 08:08 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ancalemon.livejournal.com
...I kind of want to see how the pornier version would have turned out, though. XD

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followed the link from new-Who

on 2005-07-05 08:46 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] tmpe5t.livejournal.com
That was cool! Four was my 'definitive' Doctor, and nine has been the best one since... It's a shame tom baker's so old, a crossover story would rock! Unless they got Jon Colshaw in to do it...

Re: followed the link from new-Who

on 2005-07-05 03:52 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm glad you liked. I've always been fond of Four.

on 2005-07-05 09:44 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] lilka.livejournal.com
Oh, squee. I love this absolutely to death (but then you knew I was going to).

>“Let me guess,” he said. “You’re about to offer me a jellybaby.”

Hee!

>The weight and warmth of another living, breathing Time Lord seemed suddenly the only thing that mattered in the world; the Doctor thought he could feel the reassuring murmur of another double heartbeat.

This killed me dead. Oh, the Doctor angst! And the shiny pretty UST. Lovely. Well done you.

on 2005-07-05 03:55 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you. It had to be written, of course. :)

(sent here by frightened...)

on 2005-07-05 01:58 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] bethanthepurple.livejournal.com
Four & Nine OTP

Lovely, thanks very much.

Re: (sent here by frightened...)

on 2005-07-05 03:55 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
You're welcome. :)

on 2005-07-05 02:14 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kowarth.livejournal.com
a curly haired lunatic and that title but no Marc Bolan! the horror! ;)

seriously though, much congratulations, you've got the Williams era Baker down to a tea. if i didn't know better i'd suspect you were Garteh Roberts in disguise. (it would have to be one hell of a disguise)

poor Jack.

on 2005-07-05 03:57 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*g* Maybe I'll do a fic called Twenty-First Century Boy just for the hell of it.

You've met me, you know how good the disguise would have to be. Thank you. :)

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on 2005-07-05 03:42 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] grapefruitzzz.livejournal.com
Oh I like that! I'd forgotten what Four was like, I hadn't seen him for so long, and there he was!

on 2005-07-05 03:57 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*grin* Pleased to hear it. Thank you. :)

on 2005-07-05 04:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] hathy-col.livejournal.com
I have the followinh final words to say to you before I cut off all communitication:

1. YAY NINE LIKES GREEN JELLYBABIES.
2. I have brought my own rubber gloves, thank you very much.

That was really rather brilliant. I may well hate you for this. YOU DID IT AGAIN YOU BAD BAD PERSON.

(Although you know what I realised the other day? From first appearences, Five/Ten=OTP)

on 2005-07-05 04:21 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*giggle* Should I say "I told you so", or leave it as a given?

I am, of course, genuinely delighted that you liked it, and Five and Ten, well... *ponders*
Posted by [identity profile] gamesiplay.livejournal.com
(This comes with the usual caveat of I-have-no-idea-what-I'm-talking-about, but:)

Damn, was that fun to read.

And “Sort of like Toulouse-Lautrec on LSD?” cracked me up.

(I really must get my hands on this show at some point. Especially what with the John-Barrowman-being-canonically-bisexual[?!] thing. Is this true or have I been misinterpreting?)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you!

I have a thing about Four's clothes. It's worrying and I try not to think too much about it. The resemblance to Toulouse-Lautrec was apparently intentional, however. :)

Is this true or have I been misinterpreting?

Oh, yeah. Very much so. It's downplayed for the kiddies, but we do meet one of Jack's exes, a (male)soldier called Algy, just before he tries to seduce Rose. He later tries the Doctor (who says to buy him a drink first!) and there are various other people of both genders. He's a big slut. :)

And in the end, he says goodbye by kissing Rose and then the Doctor (see icon) with equal tenderness. I love the BBC. *g*

on 2005-07-08 04:09 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] laurab1.livejournal.com
This is fabulous! Thanks!

on 2005-08-25 03:01 am (UTC)
ext_942: (Default)
Posted by [identity profile] giglet.livejournal.com
Oh, this is lovely! Thanks!

on 2005-09-11 11:54 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] fantasyprone.livejournal.com
“‘Though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil...”

The Doctor nodded. His own voice was far more familiar to his ears, quiet and speaking only truth. “For you are with me. I remember that. Goodbye, Doctor.”

Oh, I LOVE this! I'd write something more coherent, but I'm not good at reviewing ^__^;; But I adore this fic! The idea of the Doctors meeting themselves... *adds to memories*

on 2005-09-12 10:59 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
*g* Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked. Have you seen any of the actual eps where trhe Doctors meet themselves? I'd love to see one where Nine and Ten meet...

on 2005-10-18 04:02 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] msc-fic.livejournal.com
Just in the process of consolidating some favorites and I realized that I hadn't ever left feedback for this piece. I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely adored this, and thought the characterization of the two incarnations was deftly handled.

on 2005-10-18 10:17 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com
Thank you very much. :)

on 2010-03-14 08:48 pm (UTC)
mysticalchild_isis: (dr who 4)
Posted by [personal profile] mysticalchild_isis
I love this story- it's so perfect for all involved.

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