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raven ([personal profile] raven) wrote2013-06-16 09:27 pm

fic prompts

So, hello, I'm sorry for the spam. But I have a bad case of Sunday night hyperactivity. If you want a ficlet, please say so: fandom, character(s), prompt - I like this list and this list, but anything. Won't promise to write them all, but will try. ([personal profile] forthwritten, this time I will try to do better.)

[identity profile] thingswithwings.livejournal.com 2013-06-22 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my god, this is gorgeous. And you are so talented that it is kind of unfair to the rest of us. Seriously, the glimpse you give us here, the touches of worldbuilding, the parallels to the show and the disjunctions with it . . . gorgeous. Genius. And the tenderness between Hawkeye and BJ is overwhelming and subtle and perfect. This line was amazing:

"Never been, and I miss it. You gotta tell me what exactly I miss about it sometime."

. . . because it was 100% a Hawkeye Pierce line, perfectly something he'd say, but with a different kind of melancholy to it, adjusted to the different horror of their circumstances.

[identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com 2013-06-22 02:08 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you, my dear. I really enjoyed writing this one, I'm very glad you liked it.