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raven ([personal profile] raven) wrote2004-04-08 02:02 pm

Writing issues

I'm having writing issues.

Firstly, my fic for [livejournal.com profile] remixredux. The deadline is in less than a week, and I hadn't written a word. So I finally sat down and had a go. The problem is, the writer I've been assigned to remix is really not me at all. I really wish it hadn't been Harry Potter fandom I'd been assigned to, because it's such a large fandom with so many pairings and eras. My remix author writes almost exclusively Harry/Draco, which is bad to begin with - I have written absolutely nothing about anyone of Harry's generation - and she likes NC-17. I have never attempted to write NC-17 fic. Not because of prudery - I'll read it happily enough - but because I physically can't. My characters turn into cardboard cutouts and my writing deflates and goes completely flat. The only fic that I could see myself remixing is fluffy PWP, and I couldn't think of a particularly original angle on it, so I'm just writing it as I'd have written it. The result is getting extremely sardonic in tone, which I'm afraid might be taken as an insult, and I haven't even got to the porny bits, which will undoubtedly cause me much angst as I can't write the damn stuff. I don't even like the pairing!

In short, anyone got any advice? On writing porn, on writing Harry/Draco, on writing in general?

In other news, I've wanted to write Stargate fic for some time now. My Stargate fic is invariably gen or het, for some reason. Have never written Stargate slash. That's besides the point. I sort of kind of have something in mind. I wanted to write something fairly long, but light-hearted and funny. A plot duly presented itself.

Now... I know it's a cliché. Everyone writes a story in which SG-1 are transformed into children. It has even happened (admittedly on a very limited scale) in canon (Fragile Balance). But the thing is, I've never seen it done well in a fic. There is one out there I've just been reading, and while it had potential, it's completely let down by beta-type issues. Bad grammar, inconsistent capitalisation, cliché characterisation, that kind of thing. I know [livejournal.com profile] minkboylove did it as well, but her version is also slightly different.

So I could do it. It would be gen, sans angst, probably a complete cliché (I'm using that word a lot), but it would be fun to write. I'm torn on the idea.

Lunchtime.

[identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com 2004-04-08 11:28 am (UTC)(link)
*pets*

dont' worry about it, the whole point of Remix is just to take the same idea and do it your own way. If yours is cynical and smutless, well, that's just cause you're different. It'll be just as good in its own way, I'm sure. If it makes you feel any better about the due date, [livejournal.com profile] sociofemme hasn't written a blessed word of hers either, and I know that [livejournal.com profile] musesfool has been trying to beat Remus into submission for hers for weeks.

My Remix is done, but this Percyfic is killing me *pokes it*

[identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com 2004-04-08 11:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, my love. I'm writing the damn thing right at this moment, and it sounds so completely ridiculous that I think I'll post it anonymously.

Percyfic? Sounds fun. What are you doing to/with/at him?

I would much prefer to be beating Remus into submission. *grins*

(Anonymous) 2004-04-08 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
smee here

may should visit erotic story sites or fictionpress m/m slash R rated stories for ideas
I hope that helps

[identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com 2004-04-08 11:35 am (UTC)(link)
Heya. How come you're posting anonymously?

(Anonymous) 2004-04-08 11:59 am (UTC)(link)
caus i cant be bothered sisgning in ! and caus i gtg soon so how r u ?

hehe I randomly tag you!

[identity profile] megumi-mix.livejournal.com 2004-04-08 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't know you I just found your journal random and I have to say I really like your stargate sg-1 mood icon thingies! I don't know if they even still air that but I loved that show! Anyways, sorry for randomly wasting your time!

Re: hehe I randomly tag you!

[identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com 2004-04-08 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Stargate does still air, yes. A good show.

I can't take credit for my mood theme - I share it with [livejournal.com profile] shipperkitten - but I'm glad to hear you liked it.

[identity profile] tobiascharity.livejournal.com 2004-04-10 09:02 am (UTC)(link)
you told me you'd tell me if you ran across movie!Starsky/Hutch, and I promised likewise, so:

http://www.livejournal.com/users/ladyjaida/292123.html

eeeeee so good and so sweet and so perfectly, ringingly true.

[identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com 2004-04-10 01:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeee!

[identity profile] arianwen.livejournal.com 2004-04-10 11:58 am (UTC)(link)
In short, anyone got any advice? On writing porn, on writing Harry/Draco, on writing in general?

Sadly not advice, but would be extremely willing to read H/D slashfic... mmm... ahem.

Cassie x

[identity profile] loneraven.livejournal.com 2004-04-10 01:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, you'll get a link once it's up on the website. Hopefully I haven't completely mangled the pairing. :)