ext_2485 ([identity profile] lilyoftheval5.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] raven 2012-08-13 11:34 pm (UTC)

Interesting and enjoyable to read, you touched many characters in your narration.
However, I simply love surprise at the end. Since I've a rather hazy familiarity with 'His Dark Materials' I gotta ask - does Helen's and Gregor similar daemons mean anything extra special in the canon?

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